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Post by Skittles on Oct 13, 2004 19:28:51 GMT -5
They can be about anything. Here's a poem a I wrote not to long ago.
The love that I have found
It seems to be all around
Pierced my heart and stole my soul
Being with you makes me whole
Although I never knew
The one I love is only you
I feel your touch
Though you're not here
You took my breath
When you were near
I lost you once
I thought I died
You came back
I nearly cried
I'll always love you
This I know
I'll always have you
Don't let me go
When I look deep into your eyes
I see behind you're love's disguise
You've hidden deep inside of you
The love that tore your heart in two
But I hear it better than the rest
Your heart still beats beneath your chest
(That was actually based on Spike. Being alive, that is. Yeah, yeah. Keep laughing, but it's true. lol)
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Post by Skinwalker on Oct 14, 2004 15:05:43 GMT -5
here's one i did 4 yrs ago, get from it what u will.
THE HUNGER
Waiting in silence in the beautiful dark world
Seeking out its victims in new ways at every turn
The night can be a comforting solace to those of this nature
If only the prey could be more and more in despair
The light of day takes the hunger away
Time spent to be in with those of the so-called normal
Mulling about in the usual actions of the waking man
Searching for the meaning of what exactly it is that should already be known
Wandering aimlessly making the grade in this thing called life
Loved and warmed by those closest
Yet change will come before it is willed to happen
The unforeseen things that can’t be altered
The mind goes into deep slumber
The pangs of hunger then begin anew
The state of this being is more than words can truly convey
The feeding time is upon the lateness of the hour
The night again commands the insatiable thirst
Traveling in the darkness longing for closure
Spying on one so fair and alone
Pausing for a moment before gorging in delight
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Post by Skittles on Oct 14, 2004 15:07:37 GMT -5
*claps*
;D It's awesome
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Post by Skinwalker on Oct 14, 2004 15:07:42 GMT -5
i have stories i could post but they're like 10 pages though, i don't wanna take up too much space on here lol. anyways good poem u did Skittles, i like how Spike inspired it.
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Post by Skinwalker on Oct 14, 2004 15:08:35 GMT -5
oh u read it, thanx. well some ppl in class got different meanings from it but its supposed to be lycanthropic in nature, ie. werewolves. hehe
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Post by Skittles on Oct 14, 2004 15:09:07 GMT -5
Thank you. Weird thing was, I didn't even mean for it to be about that when I started, but after the third line, it just formed into that.
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Post by Skinwalker on Oct 14, 2004 15:20:12 GMT -5
ah, i can understand how that goes. i mainly got into poetry cuz of a class i had 4 yrs ago, and so that was like the first one i did, and it all just came out, as my mind goes to dark places quite often, which reflects in my style of art, or my stories, etc, and my taste in movies etc.
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Post by Skittles on Oct 14, 2004 15:58:15 GMT -5
Yeah, I know the feeling.
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Post by Skinwalker on Oct 15, 2004 21:55:37 GMT -5
today i was really thinking about a Buffy fic, i had the opening all done, in my head, actually which was pretty fun thinking about kinda. but all i had was like the teaser part, anyways i had it set now, so its what the ch aracters would be up to now. but not sure i'll write it, but was fun thinking that up though, cuz its been a long time since i've thought of Buffy fic.
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Post by irol on Oct 15, 2004 22:13:25 GMT -5
wow, you guys both have really amazing stuff! someday i'll post some of my writtings here. i'm really weird about letting people read my stuff. but i feel safe here (i know that sounded cheesy, but you know what i mean, right??)
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Post by Skittles on Oct 15, 2004 22:18:10 GMT -5
Yay! I'm glad you feel comfortable with us. Makes me feel all special inside. ;D
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Post by irol on Oct 15, 2004 22:54:34 GMT -5
that's why i like it here so much. everyone gets along and there's no hating on people like on other boards
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Post by Skinwalker on Oct 15, 2004 23:14:39 GMT -5
yeah somet ime ill post more poetry or one of my teen stories. i made up this whole world set in the fictional town of my making called Hudson Beach. i first started doing HB stuff about 4 yrs ago, at the time they were just basic teen stuff, then i started adding supernatural elments, to make it more fun, but not like Buffy, very different from that, but they did deal with otherworldy stuff, but it was like this secret, everyone had their own personal issues to deal with, that they tried to keep secret. the main ppl were Chase and Chastity, who were brother and sister, i admit though they';re nothing like the Walsh twins on 90210 i did get the idea of the for similar sounding names from Brandon and Brenda. and in mine Chase is 2 yrs older than Chastity. then i had other characters interact with them, as the sibs had jsut moved from another town to HB.
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Post by irol on Oct 15, 2004 23:16:44 GMT -5
^sounds interesting.  |
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Post by Skinwalker on Oct 15, 2004 23:21:57 GMT -5
thanx, and i just realized how much i like the letters HB, hmmmm. course we have towns here with that initials too, one of which is where the tv show The OC is set.
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